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I can’t forget
that first fire on my skin,
or the way embers danced through my eyelashes
when you touched me,
that taste of flame in your mouth.
I dream about your hand in mine,
I see us leaping through the cosmos together.
When will our universes blend?
like star on star,
fire on fire.
well, this is embarrassing. also, I learned I'm not very good at "flirty" poems

Dedicated to the evil person on dA who made me write this. You know who you are. 

this is not serious
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wolverine959 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017
Woah... :oops: That was lovely. :aww:
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thank you so much!! :D
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wolverine959 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017
You're welcome. :aww:
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missmagicgirl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I really, really like this. :) I think that truth or dare was a good thing to happen XD 
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha I'm glad you like it :') I think I did a pretty bad job ^^;
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TimNykyri Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
A lot of passion. Beautiful.
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw thank you! <3
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amber-kat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
did your eyelashes get set on fire
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:iconsummer-peaches:
Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconamber-kat:
amber-kat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh wowie who did that 

can i set your eyebrows on fire
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes but I have big eyebrows so you're going to need a lot of fire
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amber-kat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:kiwf: Them eyebrows 
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:iconsummer-peaches:
Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DON'T HURT MEH
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amber-kat Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I NEED TO BURN YOU EYEBROWS
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eyebrow by Summer-Peaches

I literally went and cropped a photo of me so it is just my eyebrow and you can set it on fire. 
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY
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bls35mm Featured By Owner Edited Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
NICELY said above!! ....


Balance 1 by bls35mm


bls35mm
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't even know who you are, and you win the award for best comment I have seen all week. 
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bls35mm Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
HELLO! .... THANKS for making this OLD man's DAY! .... SMILES ....

I have ''ALOT" of 'comments' and 'humor', etc. in my FEEBLE gallery
here at Deviant Art ....

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My BEST and GOOD HEALTH to YOU and ALL you LOVE .... bls35mm
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You seem like such a wonderful person. 
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bls35mm Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
HELLO! .... I'm just ONE, OLD 'human' TRYING to do the BEST
that I CAN at this AGE .... And PASS ALONG my LIFE 'experiences
to those of a YOUNGER age ....

HOPE there is SOMETHING in my FEEBLE gallery here that makes ya
SMILE, LAUGH, or THINK some ....

My BEST to YOU and YOURS .... bls35mm
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se91mn Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
This poem was really beautiful. I truly did enjoy reading it.
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! <3
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:icontiecora:
tiecora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student
do the natural thing run
also this is wonderfully written  
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always run. I am constantly running. I never stop.


haha thank you ❤
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tiecora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student
same we must avoid everything
XD

your welcome ^^
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:iconsummer-peaches:
Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Everything must be avoided. You and I should write a guide on how to deal with life.

We should also make a group on here about ducks
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tiecora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student
all I can say to that is YES! AND YES!

page 1

avoid
run
hide
saved
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
page 2

You got a problem?
Run faster.
as fast as you can.
Still thinking about your problem?
YOU'RE NOT RUNNING FAST ENOUGH 
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tiecora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student
page 3

they court up to you?
then you fell over
or your slow

tips: buy a car  
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
People are naturally attracted by disasters. That's why news about shootings and earthquakes get more attention than news about dogs' contests.
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so glad this poem reminds you of shootings and earthquakes Nod 

Because it's really about a dog contest Oh Noes! 
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
A fire in dog contest?!

Poor doggies.
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R-Doll Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, I don't see this as flirty although it is there in the tone. It's more passionate and speaks romantically. 
Like did you think of Ignis writing this?

I also like the last two lines of your poem
like that's profound! 
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I failed at the flirty part :XD: Seems I am just too passionate to make it simply flirty :lol:
haha the fire did bring Ignis to mind :')


Haha thank you!
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R-Doll Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome ^^
Fire-orb 
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IfDeathhadaCat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Did :iconobelis: make you do it? :lol:
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Sadly, not me, though I wish an idea like this would have come to my head.

I would have asked to make it 18+. :lol:
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank goodness you didn't think of it then!! ahahahaha
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS TIME

I had such a good opportunity... you always picked dare...
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So many things you could have asked for....a poem, a story, a picture, a photo.....so many missed chances :lol: I was actually surprised! 
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I was being too smooth yesterday. :shakefish: 
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I appreciate your going easy on me Flirtatious 
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Next time, I'll be as hard on you as I can. :stare: I'll ask for smut story of something.

Beware!
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IfDeathhadaCat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahahahaha I was hoping it WAS you to be honest! xD
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Next time! :la:
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not this time!!! XD
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IfDeathhadaCat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Seemed like the right person to start off guessing. xD
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know if you know this person....she acts sweet and innocent.....but she is WICKED :lol:
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